Thursday, July 9, 2009

When I see you




When I see you, I don't know what to say.
When I think about you, I want this ache to go away.

Your smile makes me warm inside,
but it also makes me want to hide.

To run away from the things I do,
to run, and never return to you.

Does it hurt you to see me this way?
Will things ever again be the same?

Where is that point of no return?
How do I silence my heart, that yearns?

Can you fix something which has broke?
Can you take back the words you spoke?

I want for you to hold my hand,
And walk with me in the sand.

I want to go back, but can't find the way.
Don't want to be stuck in this place I stay.

Is it too much too ask of you?
To come get me, and show me the way through?

Do I even deserve it?
Or must I earn it?

When I see you, I don't know what to say.
Maybe, just maybe, I never really went away.
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10 comments:

  1. cmbcJuly 9, 2009 at 7:35 PM

    Beautiful. I love it.

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  2. AltieJuly 9, 2009 at 7:38 PM

    thank you. i was worried, cuz i didnt get comments yet. i hought maybe no one could see the new post.

    i like it too ;)

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  3. YossiJuly 9, 2009 at 8:05 PM

    nice. you wrote this recently? with camp you actually have the time of clearheadedness? (not a word, according to my red line under it, but so what?!)

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  4. AltieJuly 9, 2009 at 8:18 PM

    i wrote this last night, sitting in the office, trying to work on camp, supposed to go to sleep. i just saw the picture taped to the computer, and this poem just came to be.

    lol. nice word. submit it to wikipidia. and funny u say that, i think this poem is more confusion than anything clear. but you are right, all my mind is filled with now is camp. no clearheadedness there :P

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  5. zeldaJuly 9, 2009 at 10:55 PM

    wow you wrote what all of us are really thinking....thanks for being truthful and honest..at least now we know we are not alone out there...its the bluntness that makes us chnage....

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  6. AltieJuly 9, 2009 at 10:58 PM

    u know u can always count on me for the truth, and to be honest, and blunt, and a lot of other things. thanks.

    yay! zelda, your first commwnt! welcome to blogger!

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  7. the sabraJuly 10, 2009 at 3:34 AM

    PA

    (that's "post appreciated" ahem, NOT "Palestinian Authority")

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  8. AltieJuly 10, 2009 at 5:06 AM

    lol. TY (thank you.)

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  9. eJuly 13, 2009 at 5:56 PM

    the life of an errant chasid...

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  10. AltieJuly 13, 2009 at 9:32 PM

    and unsure as to which way to go

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