So cynical
so critical
so involved with all the physical.
So practical
pragmatical
no need for all political.
UN-typical.
So logical.
Me, no I'm not hypocritical.
It's comical
YOU
so distrustful
fanatical.
I'm quizzical
analytical
you are just stereotypical.
Question?
No that was rhetorical.
You talk and it's all just nonsensical.
You don't believe in magical.
No room for hypothetical.
so cold and clinical. Mechanical.
So egotistical
think you are the pinnacle
of everything epical.
Your ideals are so radical
to the point of diabolical.
Scheduled, never erratical.
Me? I may be skeptical
even cynical
and critical.
But hey at least my brain is vertical
symmetrical.
AND grammatical.
Never whimsical
Unequivocal.
No need for the illogical.
Don't need your vocals.
Unethical
Heretical.
You are after all physical.
Typical.
Degradable.
Talking statistical?
Or mystical?
Anthropological?
Cynical-
it is reciprocal
almost satirical.
You can be rabbinical
and I'll just keep my cynical.
at least I am juridical.
Ironical.
wow, definitely the most interesting piece i've read in a while!
ReplyDelete:) thank you.
ReplyDeleteLoved every line!
ReplyDeleteThere are some words that you conjugated in a way I've never seen before. It was quite amusing to read and made me wonder if any of them were forced (as in, not real words, but necessary to maintain the style). I discovered surprisingly few (and only according to Microsoft Word). All in all, a very enjoyable learning experience! But if you had someone in mind when you wrote that... ouch.
:) thanks i really enjoyed writing it and love it every time i read it.
ReplyDeleteI googled some of the words. They may not be real words in the dictionary but they seem to be acceptable online. And ya it helps the flow.
It was directed at someone but said mostly in jest so no worries :) :) thanks i really enjoyed writing it and love it every time i read it.
I googled some of the words. They may not be real words in the dictionary but they seem to be acceptable online. And ya it helps the flow.
It was directed at someone but said mostly in jest so no worries :)
It has a really good flow. Poetry is all about the flow... the rhyming is secondary - but this has both. good stuff!
ReplyDelete:) Thank you. Glad you liked it.
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